tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061388116565250443.post706853945540994824..comments2008-11-16T22:23:53.355+07:00Comments on LeeL Zhong's BLOG: Gestal Practice 2Le Kien Trunghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13745629509802763953noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061388116565250443.post-13627248305449422352008-11-16T22:23:00.000+07:002008-11-16T22:23:00.000+07:00This design is very hard to read. I don't really f...This design is very hard to read. I don't really feel closure.It's not a rectangle, but some other irregular shape, so the lines do not really help. <BR/><BR/>You need to spend more time with this design and see how you can use gestalt principles to improve the design. <BR/><BR/>The title text needs to stand out more from the background since its more important. It needs more weight. Right now, it gets lost amongst the colors in the background.Dim Sumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03991796428743388509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061388116565250443.post-67432820705229116802008-11-06T00:03:00.000+07:002008-11-06T00:03:00.000+07:00You need to discuss your blog postings. Otherwise ...You need to discuss your blog postings. Otherwise I will give you no credit. <BR/><BR/>What were you trying to accomplish with this assignment?Dim Sumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03991796428743388509noreply@blogger.com